hmm..
I think that it would have been funnier if you saw them break the cup at the beginning, and then have the guy walk in and get mad.
Author Comments
This is my first video...well, my first video I've submitted to the Newgrounds Flash Portal.
It's a video about something breaking, and two guys "discussing" who did it. It's short. It was originally a video for me to get practice with lip syncing, expression, movement, audio recording, general movie stuff, etc., but it came out pretty good, so I figured I might as well put it on Newgrounds.
It's a bit difficult to follow the different voices, because each one is my own. This is what it would sound like if I was arguing with myself.
All comments are appreciated. I really would like to improve on my work, so any comments on what's good and what's not good are greatly appreciated.
Also, I'm intending to make a sequel. The sequel should round off the story a bit more...
Very well executed.
The animation and voices were spot on. I'm surprised your account and videos don't get more views than you have already- you're very talented.
5/5, 10/10, keep making videos, no matter what people say. By the way, My 5/5 raised your video from 3.10 to 3.11. Hope you like it. :)
theta4 responds:
Thank you. I'm glad you liked my stuff. And thank you for your votes.
I'm still hoping for top 5 of the day though. *sigh*...someday.
Hahah
That was trippy, this is what it must sound like when I'm arguing with myself!
Check out the background on the intro screen. Nice.
Lulz to the "not this one" button.
Actually,
I thought you did a great job of differentiating the voices without getting silly about it. I could definitely tell which dialogue was coming from which character. The only thing was that a lot of the third guy's dialogue was totally lost under the second guy's explanation, but maybe that's exactly what you intended. Considering that you recorded all the voices yourself, you did a real nice job of making some realistic conversation, and it seems like a fairly difficult subject.
The animation was no great shakes, but it wasn't bad, and it did the job.
reminds me
of home movies sorta.
but i digress (ooh, fancy word!), all the guys sound the same,
its kinda funny, but it would do better to at least make a different voice or sumthin.
jesus im stupid.