It's not top of the line ya, but it's good for an intro for sure, maybe I guess make him look over before he does his whole vanish act though
Not very effective.
A Sonic wannabe doing a quick move into some Flash-filtered text in the middle of a desert doesn't seem very effective, even if it is just an ID.
This is not half bad for an intro. Though I hope you'll add a bit to it. Then again, so long as the flash that goes with the intro is good, I wouldn't worry too much about it.
Can't wait to see the actual flash!
This would be a good intro to your flashes. I cant really think of what adding to it. Maybe some movement at the beggining instead of him just standing there for a couple seconds doing nothing.