This is my first flash ever
could be good
if it was longer than 4 seconds and had an actual plot. it's a good flash test andi guarantee if it had a storyline it'd be nice, and maybe some voice talent would do it justice as well, but for now this is only an attempt, but it's better than anything i could do so you win x].
Wow..
It rolled around for ten minutes before I realised nothing was gonna happen...
You win xD
no, you are win... and if you were able to watch this for 10 minutes your were most likely intoxicated lol
Not much content
however I liked the animation, but it lacked a bit in the story line department.
The music was good. Keep doing flashes but make them a bit more interesting
as I think you could do well.
Hey
You have a really cool graphic style man. I'd love to see this extended with a storyline.