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The Three Commandments

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As a school assignment, we had to create a last lecture, like the book. So I created a flash.

(Everything drawn with a mouse)



Slideshow like, but good. Props for the music. Liking what you're trying to say.

LenardNotLenny responds:


Great job

Its always nice to see a flash that makes you think and has a great message

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LenardNotLenny responds:

that would be the point. thanks

Words to live by!

but then again...
No, you're right. :)

LenardNotLenny responds:


Very good

A really ground breaking flash.

I loved the visual element to the movie. It may have been simple, but what you showed was very good. Very orientated towards the audio but that worked perfectly.

The audio was excellent. Loved the automated voice, along with the backing track.Worked well. What was said was very informative, and great.

OVerall, this movie wouldn't win any beauty awards but it's message was perfect. Great job

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LenardNotLenny responds:

thanks so much. it is the message that im relying on.


Visuals: Could be better drawn but I think they were on the better side of average, the animation looked pretty smooth, and I agree subtitles would help a lot in this flash

Audio: While normally i don't encourage the use of the robot voices, it works in this flash, hard to understand at times and it reminded me of Will Shatner at the end, but reminiscent of a passive observer to the decline that the flash is about

Overall: Great message that people really should listen to and I totally agree with you, just keep working on the visual presentation with your next work

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LenardNotLenny responds:

fank you very much.

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Credits & Info

4.08 / 5.00

Oct 3, 2008
12:37 AM EDT
Comedy - Original