I have to say, you've have really outdone yourself on this one. I liked how you had used all of the puns and all of the curse words as an added effect. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next work.
The part with them busting out of the fish had me going.
hes running for his "life"! heh get it. heh
THIS IS AWESOME
wow. I've seen the other entries for this contest. and this one is pretty funny. one, because it has dialouge. and two, it had a twist ending to it.
**** mama mia!
the easter egg was funny. Falco pawnchhhhhhhhhhhhhh!