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Well, for starters, you forgot a preloader. This movie is so small that a simple button would be enough, just to keep it from looping indefinitely by itself. Otherwise, it's not os crappy.
Author Comments
I made this flash animation for a school assignment of my brother's. The idea was to define a certain literary term, which you should find out if you watch the cartoon. I made the enire animation, including pre-prduction, in about three hours, however, I definately took a lot of shortcuts. Despite this, it seems like everyone who watched this cartoon really enjoyed it, and I hope you do too. Your comments are welcome.
Sound FX from www.parnersinrhyme.com and www.a1soundeffects.com
So-so
The video wasn't really funny or innovative, just a Tom&Jerry revisited, IMO. Anyway, a preloader/play button would have been nice. An end would be suited as well, since people tend to dislike endless loops (myself included).
As for the graphs, well, they're quite nice for something made in three hours. The plot could have been better, though.
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