Hmmm..needs some work
O.k....lets begin, to start of with your animation is too choppy, you need a faster frame rate. Next, you need to enhance the graphics...I know Maple story uses bit animations, but did you consider using something else to make it look alot nicer?? Overall: 5/5; 8/10; and keep working on it...hope to see a little bit more improvement on your next animation. :)
Vashie