Not good enough, sorry.
It seems like you have good story ideas. Try to improve on the voice acting, add some better backgrounds, just improve on the graphics in general. It's not really a good idea to submit stuff until you get the hang of it.
i hope you enjoy it.
Not good enough, sorry.
It seems like you have good story ideas. Try to improve on the voice acting, add some better backgrounds, just improve on the graphics in general. It's not really a good idea to submit stuff until you get the hang of it.