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This is the first episode of FrameByFrame Fun. I am new to FBF, so I will get heaps better. I am very pround of this episode, as I had heaps of fun making it ;P
Practice =/= Flash movie
This is the kind of thing I would do to practice and learn how to animate better, and it is definitely an important thing to do. However, there is a reason why things like this shouldn't be submitted, imagine every user made little practice movies and submitted them here. The portal would be flooded with thousands of 15 second movies with no substance, perhaps things that aren't animated horribly, but things that we don't need to see here. Consider making more "feature length" flashes or at least something with more substance than a line flying around the screen, and keep things like this to yourself (but don't stop practicing of course)
As for the animation, your frame rate is either slow or you just drew it very jumpily. it could be smoother, but at least you are putting effort into frame by frame animation. Keep in mind that animating a line is even more simplistic than animating a stick figure, I can't really throw up my arms and say "YOU ARE AN AMAZING ANIMATOR, MAKE A REAL MOVIE NOW!" because real movies involve more elaborate shapes and drawings.
I hope you take the time to practice such things and then apply them to a real movie, something that I can show actua appreciation for.
Not worth watching
Well animated, but boring. NOTHING happens, and what I see on the screen is the result of someone learning how to use flash, rather than making a good flash movie.
You got the know-how, now make something worth watching!
well, it had good animation, just really boring...put some music to it or something...for your first in this kind of animation, not to bad, but it definitly needs inprovements...
for your first one, but ad music next time, will make it infinitely better if you add the right music. ;D
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