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Pancreas Explosion

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Sep 24, 2008 | 7:10 PM EDT

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Welp, my first submission! I voice acted, and animated this entire animation. Yes, it aint like the pros who post on newgrounds, my idols. But hey, I can just keep improving and growing in my animation skill, right? Give me some heads ups when you post, and don't flame me because I aint the best.




Rated 1.5 / 5 stars

You know what bugs me...

...i actually like the way you drew the characters, and yet it's 10 sec. long and is the epitamy of a waste of sad, I think if you took more than 10 min to make something it might turn out really good...but as for this...well you get the point.

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Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Here's my advice

Its good that you have such a good attitude about your flash, but that doesn't change that fact that when you submit something to newgrounds, it has to meet the standards of many others, not just your own. The voice acting needs work, not only was it too quiet, the Arnold impersonation sucked. It also doesn't help to sound like a 13 year old. The animation was too short and lacked a plot and the humor... wasn't that funny. The animation needs more detail as well. Lines just don't fly with most people especially if the animation is lacking in other qualities. I'm not too sure on how you could improve this. Personally I would scrap this and work on something else.

Keep up the good attitude though and practice your flash and you'll get better.

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Phrap responds:

Yes yes, I understand that many Newgrounders want awesome work. I haven't learned flash at a school, or flashed for decades, so don't grab the gun and shoot me :P. But hey, I didn't try impersonating Arnold.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Didn't see that coming

Just gotta love the retarded humor.

Phrap responds:

Thanks dude,