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This is short movie about my creature and 1st submission flash for NG,no preloader sorry.
I hope you enjoy it... i ll make another version of this film so wait^^
Osten is my creature that is a small cute unknown creature that live in Oland
it have wonderfull world,story,friends and parody... chack it out!
hope you like it... and enjoy ! peas
Hard to Understand
I didn't really follow what was happening. The beginning made no sense, at least to me. The end was neat though. (the fighting scene)
hi,thanks for your comment anyway...
and you right, i need more study on this to make it better and better.
I'm gonna break this down..
Audio - Kinda of annoying at the beginning when he is doing his whole weird noise screeching thing, lol. The walking, you might of wanted to choose a bit of a better stepping sound for that. Spray paint sound, is good.
Animation/Graphics - Good, good, good. Not the best but good indeed. You might want to make the guy with the can of spray paint move more up and down when he is walking to give it that more of a.. "Hey I'm walking" look, not really a "I'm sliding look at me" kinda thing.
My opinion - I think the flash itself is pretty good. I like how you actually showed him spray painting it, and actually did a good job doing it. I was really hoping for more in the flash though if you know what I mean.
Like I said you might not want to use that "screeching" sound thing for your little character guy, cause honestly it annoyed me.
Hopefully he will use some of these tips.
Wow super cool!
This was truly cool....I like the Spray painting song.....
Somthing just like that happened 2 me!
Only 2 days ago aswell lol
I really liked unique the animation and characters where also i know how hard it is to animate some one spray painting and i think u pulled it off quite well.
I was entertained
Love it Love it Lovitty donkey lovin!!!11
ok all the lame jokes away I see this is your second submission, I have to admit you have a sense of style baby!
I wanna see more and more of your work man, maybe touch the latest subjects (sarah palin shit, mccains douchbaggery, and no one bashed on miley cyrus yet etc.etc)
You have a great talent in animating man, great job.
so there it is summary, review, and rating :D
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