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Stick Figure Horn

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Uploaded
Sep 22, 2008 | 10:44 PM EDT

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A quick little flash I made. Enjoy!

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MistyEntertainmentMistyEntertainment

Rated 0 / 5 stars

A bit too short to be submitted to Newgrounds.

The Good

* The stickman walking animation.

The Bad

* I think it's too short and incomplete to be submitted to NG, otherwise you'll probably end up getting low scores and reviews.
* Ugly jagged rocks (I'm assuming they are rocks.) I would suggest looking at pictures of cliffs to get a more realistic perspective on what they look like.
* From a far view, it's not apparent that he's holding a French horn.
* The French horn falling was too slowly animated. It needs to be faster. Read "The Animator's Survival Kit," it teaches you how to animate falls like that that can easily be applied to something like this. It starts off a little slow and speeds up towards the end.
* The explosion was poorly animated, it was basically just a bunch of scribbles.
* The "random" premise of it all makes it look like something out of iCarly - random, but not funny. Instead it just appears childish and annoying.

Overall

* Overall, this needs a lot of work. Good luck on your future animations.



denton1003denton1003

Rated 0 / 5 stars

wtflulz

youfailllullzz.

Next time, do better.
You may get a 1.



sotormersotormer

Rated 0 / 5 stars

DUDE WHY!!!!

WHY THE HELL WOULD YOU SUBMIT THIS SHIT?!?!?!?!?!?!



DonutDonut

Rated 5 / 5 stars

*sniff* so sad

i fell sorry for the guy that lost his horn. *sniff* i pay you my bidding 5/5'd and 10/10'd



Kieran123Kieran123

Rated 5 / 5 stars

i cud really relate

i cud really relate to this flash as my mum killed herself when she lost her french horn and the animation in this was so good. Iv been waiting all my life for an animation like this