same with the last guy
seriously, UPGRADE ON THE DIALOG. might make a cheap manga, or low budget tv show at this point. its not that good currently. after your done with the animation and dialog, consult some other people about what would make the voice acting better. thats one of many weakpoints this series has. the artwork and animation is good other wise.
Lacks verity, emotion and doesn't match the situations. For example. when gunchest runs off from black's presence after black argues with the little robo bee, he yeals out telling gunchest he shouldn't be moving. then he gives in and says mobilize. that is three different emotion and demands three different styles of voice acting. and don't' get me started on the bitch fight. TOTALLY robbed it of the action and tension in teh fight. with the voice acting it would have been more intense ... don't know ... amine has a reputation of bad voice actors. sucks. DON"T BE LIKE THEM DUDES!!!
This show is candy for the eyes man.
The voice acting wasn't perfect, but I would by no means call it bad either.
Actually I wouldn't care if the voice acting was done by 13 year old kids, the visuals just are that sweet. Visuals of the cityscape, and different angles when the robot jumped into the information center, it's all well designed.
The dialogue was a bit clicheish between the two female robots, but otherwise good.
Also some constructs remind me more of GITS, and the bee makes me think of those futchikomas that are always messing around in that manga.
Good job on the series!
Great work, except the voices have little emotion. I know they're robots, so you could say that they're supposed to have little emotion, but it sounds like your trying for the emotion, but didn't quite get it. Audio doesn't seem to be your forte.
It would have be better if it was a mute movie. :(( The dialog, the hole audio part ruins the action. :(( A remake of the audio part would be a good ideea.