Cohesion is a good thing.
I think you have a lot of good voices/ideas/vibes in this but is isn't connected well together enough for a plot or even coherent dialogue except the snake monologue at the end which was the best part. Well that and the Sean Connery. I love doing his voice as well. Yesh. It seemed like you thought this up and made it while high. Which sounds good on paper but most of it ends up in smoke. That being said, I think you have a lot of potential for something great one day. Keep it up. Keep being funny. I look forward to your upcoming series. The Garbagemen in NY thing sounds sweet.