So you have a good start here on this flash it is a promising piece to better things to come. So let me enlighten you with some thoughts and insight through-out this review because I found your flash fun and entertaining. This was some good animating and a good animation overall, nice graphics nice style here and some fun times within the flash. but regardless this was pretty good, I thought there could have been some better improvments but maybe next time, but as the time being it was an alright flash submission.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well here I am once again looking for some improvment points or some possible suggestion, to be honest with this one you did ok and I would be lucky to find much as its already a decent looking flash movie. So again I will say this does not need any changes at this time.