What is it with new kids and low framerates.
Look, it was mildly entertaining, but FOR GODS SAKE, HIGHER FRAMERATE IS EVERYTHING. I don't want to wait half an hour to find out three things have happened.
Author Comments
THIS IS A DEMO:
CONTACT UMAIR_NADEEM@HOTMAIL.COM TO SIGN UP TO COMPLETE THIS PLEASE!
Not Half Bad
Considering the animation was superior to what most flash artist's with your experiance spawn (I doubt I would be able to conceive such a high quality flash on my fourth submission) I'd say this was a half decent yet brutally underrated. The flash doesn't lack in content and the animation mimics that of the films, I doubt if the screen play was any quicker die-hard fans would be satisfied. Honestly it doesn't make sense to me to reveal canocity errors or illogical actions of the characters, after all this is merely fan fiction. The only really negative feature depicted in this flash was the length, the flash appeared to constantly lag which was rather irritating and made viewing the flash significantly less entertaining.
meh..
Animation was passable, but I liked the music so I let what you have play through to the end.
Interesting idea though, to make up your own story after LOTR. Firstly, I think it's unlikely that the *ex*-ringbearer would go across the sea. Pippin didn't die, and neither did the elf king, unless you skipped over some battles that took place between the end of the LOTR and the start of your story.
umairnadeem responds:
well, if you have read the book and look at the appendencies, you'll notice that it says "TRADITION IS NOW HANDED DOWN THAT MASTER SAMWISE HAD PASSED THE GREAT TOWERS AND OVER THE GREAT SEA." and... merry and pippin DID die, with King Elessar, and then Arwen Arianna went to the great forests of lorien, (now abandoned and lonely) and Arwen lay there in grief and died. I've studied quite alot of the appendix and this is what i have evidently found. Samwise, the Ring-Bearer, is now in Valinor, the Undying Lands, as well as Legolas AND GILMI!
Needs work
The animation is very slow, but I'm sure because this is a demo you're trying to get people's words on how to improve the quality of your movie. Work on the animation, and the loader as well as the menu so that your movie will be able to go up to the speed where everybody will be satisfied. Good Luck.
Not bad
Song was great, But Graphics need improving(Its a demo movie so i wont say its too short)