Beginning
Its starts so slow its almost slow as the real Gundam Seed series
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Edit: Oh wow, 3rd place, my first award XD. Thank you Newgrounds. I can't wait to start on the 3rd episode. In terms of writing things pick up there, and I'll be looking to continue to improve. I'm aiming to completely get rid of the excess sketchy lines and will be without a doubt focusing more on emotion body language. The way I write focuses on character development, but unfortunately my animation skills are not up to par with my writing. Not yet anyway, oh well. Improving and constantly trying to better myself is a challenge that is tons of fun.
For those taking the time to critique and give insight on how to improve animation, I appreciate it.
Ok, the 2nd episode of Shattered Heaven is out. It is split into 3 parts and in total runs about 20 minutes long. The audio was cut back a bit in order to make the 10mb limit, if you want to hear full quality versions I will be putting them up on my website in full episode format, including opening and ending.
The reason it's split is this, because I passed the 16,000 frame limit twice. I am using a high frame rate because it makes the animation smoother, and to be honest, I just got used to it.
Please only leave a review if it's going to be meaningful, if you want to give advice then please feel free. But I will not bother to look at "this is shit" "this is horrible", don't waste my time or yours.
The 2nd Episode of Shattered Heaven
Part 1 of 3.
Things start to become chaotic. Animus Praevaleo makes an appearance acting on behalf of President Gail Contandino. West Point along with 4 other Angel training facilities are being attacked by an unknown force. Things quickly begin to heat up.
Adam Novus: Adam "Azure Knight" Tilford
Sharon Amare: Morgan "Mochan" Barnhart
Stephen Novus: Stephen Alonso
Ashley Bellelus: Melissa D. Johnson "Mippa"
Mario Liberalis: Corey Holland
"Mysticshinhanku"
Heather Pertencia: Candi Santora "icandi"
Luscious Malum: Ty "Aramek" Konzak
Gail Contandino: Ryan Gilbert
Animus Praevaleo: Bwoods
Solus Saevio: iamnoir
Forza Devinco: Sfox
Serenity Credo: Rina-chan
Chris Procella: Dymatrex
Keira Sequor: Merodi
Leo Ombra: Leo Rubino
Amy: Lira Tao
Extas:
Adam "nikedrummer33" Tilford
Hnilmik
hubadawaha
Sfx: Ripped from Armored Core: For Answer
Dynasty Warriors Gundam
Music:
Gundam Seed Destiny OST
Gundam OO OST.
That was great.
I really enjoyed it. :-)
Awesome, but...
1. The drawings looked a little sketchy, but I'm sure that's easily fixed.
2. The animation was great, but it could be a little less choppy.
Also.
3. Ignore people like x0silent0x down there. He's just jealous.
5/5 10/10
wtf
wtf is this shit theres no armored core 4
Pretty good
This is a pretty good flash considering that it was done untrained. I don't feel as confident as you are about doing flash without taking a crash course in a class,but I do believe you made a good start towards perfection. All it takes is time and practice no matter how much you know of the subject. It is alittle sketchy and the frame rate is a bit choppy which lead to remind me of Gundam Wing a bit. Making a flash on novels is a nice idea. Everything else can always be worked and it'll only get better.
Good luck, I'll be looking forward to seeing the next episode. :-)
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Daily 3rd Place September 14, 2008