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FPS Series Pilot

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Sep 13, 2008 | 12:33 PM EDT

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Well I finally got back into Flash. Long story. Anyway, there are two movies here. First, the Restroom Door, a small kinda Music Video to the aptly named song. Second, and the main event, First Person Shenanigans. More of a pilot episode to be precise. If you guys like what you see than comment on it and I'll see if I should go ahead and make into an actual series.

Although the FPS Pilot looks very minimalist. I started completely out of nowhere while working on my crappy Senior Project back in highschool. But I promise you if this does get a lot of positive buzz I'll make it alot better than that.

Also the ending credits for both, I just wanted to showcase those lil 8-bit remixes I did... The opening was a completely random thing I came up with one night while I just chillin in my bed. I thought, hell why not...

And lastly, this is what TK says during his lil victory dance, in case any of you were having trouble understanding him:
Mah name is Mr. Bitches. Mah aim is so good ah shoot em like finches. All da ladies asses I do so pinches. Ah go through them hoes like rags to ritches. Ah bury yo asses in tiny bitch ditches. Y'all fall to them grenades that ah pitches. Ah see y'all later cuz mah dick itches.

And since I'm already on a roll, here's his first line, note there is NO jokes hidden in this except for the word Rhubarb, slightly nodding to Portal's Cake Recipe :
100, 200, 300, 400, six-thousand, 76 million, 2 billion one, 2 billion two, 2 billion three, 976, 967, 971, 305, 3 leather shoe horns and a stick on rhubarb sway sway sway swaaaaay.

...toldja...complete gibberish I came up with...



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Wonderful! Magnificent! (Positive adjective here)!

You are an absolute writing genius! Make more of these, and I guarantee you'll get Daily 1-5 AND make the Top 50 List. But when you make the next one, could you leave the text on screen a little longer? I'm sure plenty of people would appreciate it.

Gunstar-X responds:

Thanks for this awesome comment! Also, yes, I'm sorry about the speedy text. I wasn't really paying attention to the times when I did this. I made this when I shoulda been working on my Senior Project at the time and I didn't pay much attention to that kinda stuff like I should've...

Next time, I will, I promise! I'll start on an Episode 1 as soon as I'm done with my current project! :D


Rated 5 / 5 stars

My name is Mr.Bitches!

5/5 10/10 I AM TK ON COD4!

Gunstar-X responds:

Dayum! Your aim must be so good you shoot em like finches!
Lol, thanks.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


That was freaking hilarious. Great flash, wish it had more though. Can't wait to see your next work!

(loved the tk character)

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Gunstar-X responds:

Thanks Axess! So far, these 5 reviews all say they like it. So I just might make this even bigger!


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Great flash, defiantly make more.

Gunstar-X responds:

Thanks alot Senor Sharky.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

For what it is~

XD For a short pilot, I found it very amusing... Especially TK and his incomprehensible-ness. I kept replaying the flash to see if I could understand his string of numbers and to hear his li'l ditty after shooting his buddies. I also liked The Restroom Door~ My only critique is I had trouble reading the text on the bottom of the screen because it's white and tiny on a light-colored background. Perhaps the frame ought to be bigger?

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Gunstar-X responds:

Lol. Ya, I'll prolly write down his whole lil dialogue in a bit. Also, bit of lil joke, TK = Team Killer.

Sorry about the text. I really should've made that bigger and easier to read. Prolly coulda been longer, but I already had that whole situation burned into my head and didn't feel like adding anything else. But ya, if this becomes a series, it'll be lots longer and have lots more internet humor and FPS satire thrown in.

On a side note, the numbers are completely random, no inside joke are any kind of reference in them. Although the last thing he says about Rhubarb was a slight nod to Portal.