the most increadable graphics on NG.. You really should think about a job in animation or something instead of being stuck in flash, cause you seem to have perfect qualifications :)
Arrogancy rules! but his voice sounds weird andthe fight scenes are a litle slow. but other than that this is one of my favorite movies on newgrounds. you gotta make a dressu p game of mari cause shes hot!!!!
Well, it's a bit slow. But I understand it's an episode, one of many I hope, so it's no problem. You have one of the best styles on newgrounds, and I agree with you that stick figures are getting old real fast.
I can't give you any good advice how to perfect your movies... a bit more contrast would be great...
Note - review is for the FULL version.
Not bad - but I fail to see how "episode 3 makes [the others] look like crap". It's about the same as the others - good graphics and improving voices, but about the same level of interest. I like your style, but it seems like there should be more plot progression per episode. I'm not saying you have to work HARDER, just that the plot should move a bit quicker. I look forward to part 4!!
This whole story and dialog are pretty lame, the Dialog especially. The voice acting is horrible. You should get someone else to act for Arrogancy, he doesn't sound how he looks, and sounds really dull.
You should get a writer and voice actors. Stick to animation.