Review of the full version
In addition to the problems I ran into earlier something new arose in this episode. The acton isn't fluid enough. The animation is well done but the fact that everyone moves around like someone is holding a cardboard figure and recording themselves moving it around. But this is by no means a major problem. It just struck me as odd that it arose in an animation thats this good. Far worse animators have found their way around this "choppiness" problem. And, as always, the script and voice acting needs revison. The dialogue just doesn't sound natural and people don't speak in their "inside voices" when engaged in mortal combat. I sorta feel bad for throwing all the problems with your work at you, but take heart! The bad always seems worst in the best, and you can quote me on that! Keep improving!