It was ok
Maybe it was to short,but it was funny and the idea for doing the gun's sounds like this was great too.
But you just could make it like stick figures on crack (random scenes and etc) because you have some sence of humor!
Also you should improve your animation skillz! (and if it is not tottaly an animation,what is it??? D: )
Anyways i liked it,even if it was so simple