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SRM short: McBurgerBell

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Well, this is my first cartoon since moving into college. Just an idea I had on the road driving up to Boston, nothing too special. I thought it was pretty funny when I was writing it, and I hope you guys think so too.

Also, this is continuing my new deal with using only royalty free music, at least until I start composing my own.
Thanks for watching, and hope you like it!


Entertaining but...

What was the plot exactly? They go to a restaurant, order bad food and then the climax ends up being:
"We should get going."

But I like the setting and that McBurgerBell character. If you made it longer to be a full 3 minute episode, it would be better - and with a lot more interesting ending, of course.

Good work, I hope to see your flash movies in the future, (SRM Goes to College - NOW!)

Battosai810 responds:

This was just a short I made to test out Flash CS4 on my then-new computer. I'm pretty satisfied with it, although you're right in saying it needs a better ending punchline. I'm not sure how well I could preserve the idea for a 3 minute short, but maybe McBurgerBell will be revisited in a future SRM toon.

And I want to make SRM Goes to College :( I just don't have the time right now. It could be my final for an animation class; who knows. Thanks again for reviewing my stuff!

Kinda funny.

I got a few snickers out of it! Heh heh...

Battosai810 responds:

Glad you liked it :D

i lol'd

very entertaining

Battosai810 responds:

That it is... why only a 5, if it's very entertaining though? Oh well, thanks for watching!

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3.94 / 5.00

Sep 6, 2008
2:36 PM EDT
Comedy - Original