What was the plot exactly? They go to a restaurant, order bad food and then the climax ends up being:
"We should get going."
But I like the setting and that McBurgerBell character. If you made it longer to be a full 3 minute episode, it would be better - and with a lot more interesting ending, of course.
Good work, I hope to see your flash movies in the future, (SRM Goes to College - NOW!)
This was just a short I made to test out Flash CS4 on my then-new computer. I'm pretty satisfied with it, although you're right in saying it needs a better ending punchline. I'm not sure how well I could preserve the idea for a 3 minute short, but maybe McBurgerBell will be revisited in a future SRM toon.
And I want to make SRM Goes to College :( I just don't have the time right now. It could be my final for an animation class; who knows. Thanks again for reviewing my stuff!
I got a few snickers out of it! Heh heh...
Glad you liked it :D
That it is... why only a 5, if it's very entertaining though? Oh well, thanks for watching!