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Sep 5, 2008 | 10:41 PM EDT

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This little project probably deserves an explanation. Some time ago, I was messing around in Flash just to practice a little bit, but I wasn't planning on committing myself to it; but that was before my teacher saw it. For whatever reason, he liked it and encouraged me to keep working on it. It didn't take me a very long time to complete it. If I weren't so lazy, I probably could have had this done in just a few days. Everything in the animation was drawn with the mouse (with the exception of some text). The animation is done almost entirely frame-by-frame. The sound effects are all verbal, so it deliberately sounds crappy. The whole idea behind this animation is that it's supposed to look like it had been rushed. After all, this is mostly just practice for animating drawings that were done with the mouse. If you don't like it, please be honest. Otherwise, I might be encouraged to make a sequel.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Well ok?

Well at least I didn't really lost my time. It was funny maybe 30% of the time, but some animation were just... gross. Keep working and it might become better.


Rated 4.5 / 5 stars


This was good. It had smooth animation and I actually Lol'd a couple times.
good work man!


Rated 5 / 5 stars

...Gross awesomeness.

This was absolutely 100% hilarious! It was like a rough version of the show Robot Chicken. I love watching flashes like this; it's always enjoyable and very entertaining. You should DEFINITELY make more. .... I wonder if that flower will drown the world with it's blood...


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars


Keep doing this your pretty good at it. Sure some of the jokes were almost all about puke, pee, poop, or blood but it was still enjoyable. The last one was the funniest. I know I could never make this in flash. A few tips; try to make the jokes differentiate if you're gonna do a bunch of shorts combined, improve on your drawing skill (I wouldn't use the mouse but try using the pen or lines), continuing from the last one black and white shorts are usually good but there has to be good drawing skill so if your not gonna improve on that then add more color or more variety in style. You seem like you have some potential if this is only your 2nd submission

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Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

i really liked this.

for only the mouse, the animation is really good. i think this could be the start of something good. and i'm glad you decided to carry through with it. pretty funny too.

next time use a stop actionscript, i personally don't care, but a lot of NGers do.

4/5 9/10