I basically agree with the positive comments below and hey i haven't even made a flash so your better than me
you need to actually show the violence
because this was probably a first try ill give it a 5 to help you
i know how hard it is
keep up the good work- well improve it
You really gotta spend time thinking up a story or plot or...something when you make a flash. Literally nothing happened...
Good attempt, but....
This i a seriously low quality madness flash, although admittedly you gave it a good go.
This is not what should be advertising a NG event day.
I would say even for a trailer that was too short. Quality isn't bad, but you are taking someone elses style and not really changing it that much. Try to add your own creativity into it, instead of taking someone elses.