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I've seen better flash animations get lower ratings. I had to stop watching after the first 15 seconds.
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just the next episode of a stupid flash found at darkelite9.deviantart.com
*edit: now added music (double dragon by minibosses)
darkelite9 responds:
well, not to sound like a jerk but, if you continued watching, you might have actually enjoyed it!
good.......
it gave me a little bit of a laugh, but, it would of been better with smoother animation, if you slowed down the text just a tad (i couldn't keep up with the text), and if there was sound.
darkelite9 responds:
as i've said i'll get on that, and upload and updated version. Thanks for your review anyway ^^ it still helps to hear from another
The picture quality is pretty good but...
The quality of the pictures is pretty good but i still feel you got lazy, you put effort into one of the characters and the rest are stickmen, well i'm assuming so i got bored and stopped watching after a while.
The main reason i rated this flash poorly was because of the lack of sound, silence doesn't work well in flash animation; you could put a completely random song in there and still boost your rating by 2 or 3.
darkelite9 responds:
thanks for your helpful review. I'll make sure to continue with the detail and add music, sound effects, voice overs, etc. unfortunately i had gotten a virus on my computer, and lost all of my music files. I plan on redownloading the stuff, and maybe i'll reupload this.
hum
you need sound, subtitle were to fast anymation was not great not so fluid and 1 question was the guy walking or was the scenerie moving by itself aka if you want to make a flash take your time and make a good one.
darkelite9 responds:
I'll make sure to add sound and possibly voice overs. Thanks for your critique. and the scenery was moving, i forgot to animate the conveyer belt.....x3
I like it but...
Add sound make smoother animations and u got ur self an awsome flash
keep it up
darkelite9 responds:
thanks, i had a virus infect my computer so i really didn't have any sound clips, and my parents are cracking down on internet.
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2.41 / 5.00
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- Sep 3, 2008
- 5:31 PM EDT