Great Animation, Bad Voices and Possibly Story
The animation itself was great. Very clean, beautifully colorful, big screen. I really liked that a lot. The voice acting though, I'm sorry, wasn't very good. It was about the same as if you took a few random people standing in front of a bank and said, 'read this please'. The jokes too, weren't spectacular, though I may be wrong, I'd have to hear them read by the right voice actors maybe.
I'm sure newgrounds will give you generally good reviews because the high quality of the artwork and the fluidity of the animation. But if you are really serious about making cartoons (not saying you are, I personally make cartoons for the fun of it and mine are much worse than yours lol) but if you are, then I would seriously consider getting some voice actors.
I hate seeing such hard work an amazing animation thrown down the drain because one element isn't up to par. In this case that element is the voice acting, I'm pretty sure. Anyways, thank you for your time and for the wonderful cartoon and I look forward to more.
Again, great job on the animation.
though you are correct in saying we are not professionals, the comments so far on the voice acting have been overwhelmingly positive! i like voices with a touch of reality to them rather than hyped up cartoon characters.
this was on the site before NG and who the hell spends so much time on newgrounds as to write a review longer than a short story
it was good and it made me laugh a little but all in all the comedy could be way better, it seems a little empty.
Was alright, not the best I have seen. Pretty good but, just an eh kinda video.
Your jokes were a tad bit lame, but other then that the animation looked good.
thanks for the slide show,
not nearly as good as the firs two
the end credits art is still amazingly awesome tho