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Mario's Day Off 2

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"Mario is such a fkin bum!" This is like my 5th flash already and I'm not very good yet, please vote fairly and if you don't leave a review so I can improve. VERY IMPORTANT: This has nothing to do with Mario's Day Off, I didn't even knew it existed it is not a rip-off!!! Rock on.

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A Small Step Into the Right Direction

It wasn't bad. The animations were a little lazy, but it is forgiveable. The text also can go by fast. I was able to read it all, but it took focus off scene.

Though there were only a few jokes throughout, the ending was well worth it.

ToxicFog responds:

Nice reviews guys!

its really good

but when u replay the movie the song overlaps itself but overall its awesome and the ending wuz really random

ToxicFog responds:

Thanks!

Keep trying.

Add a few more frames so the movements look more fluid, make sure to spell check, and cut back on the randomness a bit, and you'll have a hit in no time.

ToxicFog responds:

Cool, thanks.

Fix music and more fps, otherwise good

1) The music doesn't restart once the flash has loaded
2) If you replay the flash you get the song playing twice
3) Use more frames as that will make the animation smoother

Other than that really enjoyed this, good luck!

ToxicFog responds:

Thanks for the 7, i'll try to fix the song problem! (I couldn't really hear how it was played in the movie cuz I don't have sound on my comp.)

Cute...

Kirby doing Mario's job...heh. The ending was a nice touch. Music was pretty good. Keep up the good work!

ToxicFog responds:

Thx, i'll try!

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2.36 / 5.00

Uploaded
Sep 1, 2008
8:28 PM EDT