song alone
makes this watchable. good knowing it's first effort. look forward to future submissions
Author Comments
So this is the first one, not much improvement in my skill has been made. I like the sentimental value of it... Well not really.
joshuablake responds:
Good for both of us.
recording quality...
The claymation was pretty good, but the recording quality was bad. It also needs a better story, all we see is two ppl get killed. But the song for the credits is funny.
"I bought a T-shirt and the T-shirt saaaays: I....Like...Pez." lol.
joshuablake responds:
There was no story to begin with.
uh not great
the animation was not good, I recommend that you make more movement and more frames between movements, also turn up the volume on voices, its hard to hear it.
also you really got to check your spelling.
joshuablake responds:
Yes well this was my first upload to Newgrounds, I think I've improved a bit really.
poor
i barely knew what was going on voice quality sucked and it would have been better in flash
joshuablake responds:
There was no real plot so I can't blame you for not knowing what was going on, and I also have a less than professional microphone. However I like clay and will continue to try to improve my skill, if you don't like it then that is your opinion and you're entitled to it.
Fart
I Liked The Sound Effects...
joshuablake responds:
I'm happy for you.
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