bad and alittle good

if it was faster and had more to it, it would be better.

Try harder

The LF sprites are very smooth. You should put all of them while animating, not just some, that way the animation as a whole would flow a lot better, and you also need a pre-loader, which is something I unfortunately can't help you with. But keep trying! You have potential!

Needs alittle work.

The animations were very slow in the sense where I started to get boried very quickly with the Flash and could barely finish watching it. As for your sprites you used I suggest a better variety ratehr than just mass producing them on the same screen. Theres also no audio or background music but the old-lower-bottom-screen text read with a profile in it. The effects music also needs work because there was a total of about 3 or 5 I counted and 2 of them didn't really even fit the animation they were used with.

interesting but a little slow

It's a good start, good job on sprites, could have made the entire thing shorter by about half.

Plot & Flow needs work.

The sprite work was good, and I was able to follow but a suggestion... work on how your plot flows. Everything was kind of BOOM BOOM BOOM, with no real flow to the storyline. If you can add that flow, that essence that makes it easier to follow, more readable, etc, then you could have something better here.