good no super good no AWESOME YES
its awesome but can you make a jason scene creator?
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Wow... daily 5th place.. my first award ever... thank you all
First up, this IS a sprite movie. With that said this is by far my most worked on flash to date. Alotta time went into cusomizing the sprites and ripping a few of my own. My computer is a glorious terd so i have to set the quality to med just to watch my own movie so u may need to do the same in a few scenes(mainly the scene with toad running).
The Sequal is already been started and will include MORE story, answers and alot more ACTION! On top of that it will introduce alot more characters to the movie.
Please lemme know what you thought and what u think needs improvement or suggestions. I will respond to all reviews and take EVERY Suggestion or complaint into mind when finishing part two. Thanks and i hope you all enjoy the movie friens.
sleeeeep responds:
Thanks... but what is a jason scene creator? MY REAL NAME is Jason! This confuses me.
Great!
plz continue with the story :D
sleeeeep responds:
Thanks, ep3 is coming along... slowly.
Not Bad for a start
Not bad for a start. I think you made this episode seem like a GTA animation
sleeeeep responds:
how is it like a GTA animation? there wasnt any cars or hookers getting ran over.
Classic 8-bit
If the rest of the series is anything like this, I'll be looking forward to it. You don't have a long winded intro for this which is good seeing as how when Mario is involved, the people want action and not some lengthly introduction.
Gotta' love the classic sounds in this flash, it wouldn't be Mario without them.
The story also held my interest and I always waned to watch what would happen next. Overall, a great opening to what appears to be a great series.
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sleeeeep responds:
yeah i want to add more story but still keep some action as well... my next should be alot longer, thanks for reviewing
Good start
This is a good start for a series. I've seen other series that bother with a long as intro and explanations, but your flash dives straight into the action, which is a nice change from all those long intros. ;)
I liked the sound effects you used. Of course you had the typical "mario is jumping" sounds, but you also had some other sounds like the water splashing or when the toads where running. This made the flash much more interesting to watch.
However, sometimes there seemed to be some static sounds, shortly before the Toad entered Mario's castle.
The speech bubbles looked more like thought bubbles because of those dots that point to the head of the character speaking. Maybe an arrow pointing would be better here. But overall the bubbles worked quite well. I had enough time to read the text plus the text was easy enough to read. So you've done a good job here.
Now I'm wondering how this story will continue... better watch the second episode right now! :)
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sleeeeep responds:
Yes i did away with the text bubbles. With both the sounds and music i want to keep it as 8-bit as i can, thanks for this good review frien
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Daily 5th Place August 31, 2008