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This is my first flash i completed and I know my skills are considered noobish but please help me get better on my next flash project. Sorry as well but this flash doesnt have a preloader and I did try to put one but messed up along the way.
I like to thank everyone whos trying to help me becoming a better flasher. Just on a side note though, i did this flash for a school project. I'll try to get a wacom by this month so my drawings can look x50 better than using the pen tool. Once again, thank you so much!
Let's see here.
This is great. But there are many flaws that bring the ranking down. For a first flash this is pretty good. But if this wasn't your first flash it would be about 4 stars. Anyways let's get on with it. First thing that gave this a 7 instead of 6. That owl. I swear to freaking God man that owl is so annoying. But Navi is more annoying hands down. First thing that brought the rating down was the bad graphics. Again first flash not a problem. Another thing was the fail comedy. Yes I do admit it made me smile a little bit but.. This is a parody. This is supposed to make me fall off my chair from laughing so hard. You need to work on your humor a little more. Plus this was too short. And the end was most likely rushed. Also this went by too slow. The biggest concerns are: Humor fail, slow running, and too short. Try a remake and improve on those things. For the current you did a decent job for your first flash. Final score: 7/10
Decent
Pretty good :)
Not Bad.
I gave you a 10 because I always wanted to do that to the owl. Anyway, keep on working on your flash projects and you'll keep getting better. I think you have the potential to be a great animator.
Not bad for a first flash
Hey! Not too bad... You should improve at it, just need to keep at it is all. But Where was the 'Parody'? Ah well. Still, not bad!
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