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I have to say, this was much better than your previous ones.
You earned that daily feature.

Best yet. Got me interested.

You scrap the intro altogether. The movie is of a decent length. Things happen.

These are things that should have been in all your movies.

The dripping after the alien's torso was shot was way cool.

'Noo! Chinese man! Nooo!' is such a ridiculous, cheesy line. I mean the American barely new him - such histrionics are excessive. And the Chinese accent is messed up. Specially near the end, it becomes obvious that you did it in one take, with you keeping the 'chinese' accent when Malcolm X14 is speaking and using a skewed British accent for the chinese dude. Use a different take for each character, so you can keep accents and 'stay in character'.

It's a big step up from your previous efforts. Nothing brilliant, but there's a foundation here and as long as you step up your game and put the work in, you'll continue to improve.

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Marked improvement

Now that we've seen that you're capable of producing good works that have a decent length to them, please keep it up. Don't rest on your laurels, as it's only just begun.

The problem with you making the season 10 episodes long is that now you're in a position of having loose ends which pass across into the second series. Large loose ends like the missing brother don't tend to get left between series on TV, so why do it here?

A little work with the animation never hurt anyone - the pilot looks a little stiff when he walks, so watch people when they walk around the place, to see if you can spot where you're going wrong. It's only minor tweaks, so you're getting there.

The other thing I'd say is that your drawing style has improved over the course of the series. If you can invest in a tablet, I'd seriously reccomend that you do so.

Great work on removing the long intro - it might be something that you decide to put in at the start of each series, for example - kind of in a Star Wars fashion, but suddenly it's asituation where an episode this long actually starts to justify an intro like you had, so think about it.

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Best yet

This is, by FAR your best yet.

This time around you had a suitable length which, now means I can review more.
The animation was fairly good but the walking could use some improvement. The voice acting was INCREDIBLY better and I didn't really see the point of subtitles, as the talking was very clear. The sounds kept well in sync with what was happening in the background. Now I ask, Why wasn't all your movies as good as this one? If they were, they would all probably have Daily firsts. What would have been better is that you make 2 Chapters, 1 of all the small 10-20 second long movies and the second of the tenth. The story would be much easier follow if this had of happened.
Hopefully you can keep up this skill and make more.

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Wow. A major improvement from you last few movies. This had all I wished for in my last reviews.

First of all, this flash has a decent length. Not only do we have something we can review, but the length also helps to get into the flash and the atmosphere better.

Then, the music was very good and this time it was quite fitting that the music continued playing while there where some dialogues going on.

Also, the animations are much better now. The running/walking still looks a bit strange, but I think those are two of the hardest things to animate properly.

The graphics look a bit better than on your previous flashes. Not so rough and sloppy, but in fact pretty decent.
The effects of the shots (especially when the ships where shooting) are pretty good.

All in all, this is by far the best chapter of the series.

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