First time huh?
First and last really. its been long enough why havn't you submitted anything else?
I agree that there was truth in there somhow about little plastic bag but you need to show us that you can do better.
Author Comments
This is my first flash movie ever. It's about the life of a plastic bag.
SynestheticSoul responds:
Excuse me? You're giving me a low grade because I haven't submitted anything else recently? That's very very poor. I'm working on something else now but since I have JOB and not that much time, it's taking me a while. Besides, I can submit as much or as little as I want.
First Flash? Why must the bag suffer!
Honestly, it was fun. I only saw one section of animation that looked clipped, and the audio was excellent. Great Job!
Well this look like it might have pote-WHAT THE???
It looked fine when it started and it developed nice, but it all wen't down with that ending. It's a plastic paper bag, it does not have blood. If it had blood then it wouldn't be able to float.
LOGIC ERROR.
SynestheticSoul responds:
This is to everyone who's all like, "Why does it bleed?!?!"
Because I thought it would be random and funny. I see a lot of stuff that doesn't make sense. Cartoons on TV, anyone?
decent
pretty decent for your first flash, it was pretty funny =3 you have potential 3/5 6/10
For your first flash movie EVER
I give you 8/10. This was really good. good animation, sound was alright, and it was a pretty simple and funny movie. Good work.