You entertained me.
Animation and drawings could be improved a bit to make this better work. The style although probably deliberate, to me detracts slightly from the overall effect.
Although I thought the punchline (about the milk) was expected, the next one was a nice surprise. I will no doubt look at the rest of this series because it makes a refreshing change from a lot of the work showcased on this site..
i knew somtin like that wuz comin man ur good keep it comin bra
Finally, a half-decent episode!
This is a lot better then the first two episodes, I knew you would come around! I like how you made fun of figures of speech like that, also.
way better than the first
needs better animation and more emotion.
Act II : car drives. Act III:
man that was great! the first one i liked just cus it was different, kind of like the way i like Firths stuff. and the second was funny to me. but this one! man making fun of the 3 Act dramatic arch. Russ Meyer like corny drama, and still had that allure in the creepy trimming the hedges scene... great job cant wait to see the rest of the series!