Take some critisism !!! dont delete my review

its these kind of things that give pivot a bad name... check out mine and learn how t use pivot man ! the aniamtion was very choppy, stiff and the physics were... well... there weren't any ?!?

ehh

as far as soccer choreography is concerned it was good and the length was OK I suppose. But the video wasn't all to entertaining.

what the hell D:

D:

that was rly bad, sorry.
People flame us stick guys because they always say we don't put enough effort to full animate..... you didn't even put enough effort to fully animate stick people.

And instead of bitching about how hard pivot is, switch to flash maybe?
Oh, and i have used pivot. It's FUCKING EASY. Flash was not built for stick people so it's a lot harder to use the line tool. Personally, i fbf sticks with paint tool on my tablet, so it's extremely easy.

"gonna post more stuff here soon...(like in 5 min. or so) so plz dont blam my HARD WORK"

Yeah guys, im gonna spam the portal with my 'hard work.'
No. Anybody who can get in two animations within 5 mins obviously
a: has just joined newgrounds but has had flash for a long time or
b: is a fucking spammer who doesn't work hard for shit.

Yes, i just flamed you. I don't flame people who simply aren't GOOD at flash, i flame bitches who complain a lot. So go ahead call me an asshole, but it doesn't mean much coming from you.
One star for soccer coreography (or however you spell it :S)
another star for effort... although i usually give 5 stars on effort

Quality

i'm not sure how hard pivot is compared to using Flash 8, which is what i use, but if using pivot is harder and makes the movies run less smoothly then maybe you should switch to flash? Or just ignore the people who rate on quality, and not on what program you used to create it

Ummmmm

I do know that it is realy hard to make a flash, I also that you didn't work as hard as you like to think you did on this submisison. Look at all the great flash submissions on Newgrounds and then look at this and try to tell yourself that this is the epitome of working hard. Also you spelt impossible wrong near the end and I didn't think it was that hard of a word to spell. It was way to choppy and I would suggest to motion tween and increase the frame speed. One ther problem is you have the first couple of frames play over again after it has ended before it prompts you to play again. Finally you will submit some more in FIVE minutes if that is the kind of time you are putting in your flashes ther is a good reason they are getting blammed