Not bad..but there were a few things that didn't seem right..
- The graphics. It just didn't look Newgrounds-y enough. Despite you using the font, and the beams, it still looked like a cheap attempt at a Newgrounds style. The title on the menu with the rotating bevel was annoying too.
- Wording. Sometimes the wording seemed a bit weird. Sorta like whoever wrote it didn't spend enough time on the script.
The score calculator was good though. I'll give you that.
---General Overall Conclusion---
Good, but didn't look professionally done.
I got 35!