for 6 days it ok
you could have done better for future videos: if some ones falling make them move spin or what ever.
Author Comments
i have had flash for 6 days now and the result may surprise you. the video was kind of inspired by super smash bros as you can tell from the name. but i wanted to add my own touces to it and that is how this was made. hope you enjoy the video and please tell me what to improve on afterwards. anyway enjoy the movie.
Yeah, you gotta work on that.
Hopefully, the second one will be better :)
it was ok
kinda funny when it said no watching lolol great job
Very good
For 6 days i consider this flash movie very good the luigi fart jokes were quite funny even if i have seen them in loads of sprite movies allready. Hearing the Zelda cd-i "You must die" sound effect was hilarious. now its time to wonder what your flash skils would be like in 60 days.
+4 for fart jokes
-2 for repeated sounds and voices
when they get repeated they dont really flow too well if you understand what i mean