Very Choppy

The animation is very choppy and the overall graphics could use some cleaning up, you also have some spelling errors in the text.

Well...

XD i SAW KINGDOM HEARTS >_> cept the moon was blue i think..but close enough. Well... For starting its not too bad you could use improvments and what not. A little too fast moving and choppy but you arent a pro at this. Keep trying and you'll do well. I'll be watching for the next one.

*gagging sounds*

Sooooo gheyyyy!
Needs way more work....even though you a lready said you were still a newb I expectedf it to be far better. The only gewd thing was the screamin' stick guy.....he pleased meh well he did. >.<

That was interesting,

I didn't see number 1 or 2, (in fact this was the first time I actually heard of your series) I guess I better go back and watch them, the singing stickman got a little annoying but I found some comic relief in it. Also, consider changing the color of your dialouge so that it be a little more visable. :) You seem new(ish) don't know really and I try not to be such a harsh judge. It needs work but it was above average.

Keep it up, and I'm sure the next one will be better.

Could be better still

I didn't vote really bad for you, because I didn't think you needed your owkr getting kicked off, so keep on trying man. You've got potential, you're sort of doing your own writing, so keep running with that, maybe work on some original characters. Also, a nicely detailed background is always good to look at. Keep at it. :)