a decent start but needs alil work

decent job man, the script was somewhat funny with great random lines. i did laugh alil, but ur animation could use some work and u could use some more voice acters, but other then that it seems like a funny series, i can't wait till episode 2....

awesome!

man that was realy funny cant wait for the other episodes!

Hell yeah

You should totally make a series. But mengel13 is right, don't be afraid to push it to the absurd, sometimes: only for little jokes, not the whole of the cartoon. Keep the essence, easy and cool,and make some punny jokes, it's just great.

Keep on the hard work! Congrats for the good flash ^^

awesome

5/5 thats pretty good

Good, not Great...But Check It Out!

It was good, don't get me wrong...but it seemed like there was alot of "white space" in the entire entry. This is just an opinion, but I would have sped up the animation for the parts that may have drug on. A perfect example...when he fell from the building...speeding it up and having him get up really fast and just bust through the door may have had a really sharp impact on the humor. Don't be scared to push the limits!! Really push next time around until you feel almost uncomfortable but think of it this way...Even though a comedian is really good and they know they are one of the best, they still get nervous in front of the crowd because some are scared that they haven't pushed the limit enough, or have pushed it to far.