Seriously, is this the penultimate chapter in what we're seeing of this 'series'? You have the audacity to bring us a tantalising piece of animation that is probably worthy of more stars than this reviewer says. However, I'm just expressing my frustration at the lack of animation that we see here after a disgustingly long introduction.
What have you actually done in this scene? Bridged a gap between the laughably short scene 8 and the promising looking scene 10. I only hope that it is worth my time to watch and review that.
As I've said in practically all of my review for this story, it is maybe a 3 part series at best. I've been vindicated in these thoughts, as your scenes have not grown in length over the course and some of them are even shorter than the original ones.
Now that this series is drawing to a close, hopefully you can turn your attention to where you went wrong with this. I know you've won awards for this series, though so far I can't see why. Prove to me that you can do some decent animating, as your drawing skills have improved over time and I'm sure they will continue to do so. Why not try to make the next project a 1 part job that everyone can appreciate on the merits of the flash itself? If you struggle with Grammar, give me a private message, I'll be happy to help, as it's one of the things that you could certainly stand to improve on.
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