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The Carrot Escape

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A little easy-to-make animation I made out of boredom and it's late at nite. I'd seriously do a better animated and voiced it with some friends if I had a better microphone. Well anyways, I just thought of this out of no where, a journy of a carrot.

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i like carrots

dancem789 responds:

So do I.

it was ok

the carrots faces were funny. not much else. improve on animation. then you'll be better just keep on improving.

Too choppy

next time make something a little more elaborate. Also turn up the frame rate. everything was really choppy.

Too unfinished

It's just too "crumbly". It is nice to see something other than stick\mario\sonic\madness with either white backgrounds or colours that are just way too bright, and this looks like something that, after a few days' worth of work, might actually be something.
But, without sound (if even just music), it simply doesn't pack any punch at all. A submission icon - any submission icon - can only help your score. And obviously, the story is about as long as a sentence, and needs a lot more than "carrot attempts to flee, only to be crushed by a boot".
For something made while being bored at night, it's actually looking good... But those will never get you any blue or green highlights ;)

dancem789 responds:

I couldn't find any fitting music, and I have a crappy microphone.

great idea

i kno u werent being serious with this, but i really think u have something here. dont get me wrong wat u submitted sucked ass, but if u re-made this, actually trying with music and a background story, this'd be great! so ill giv u a five of five, just for the idea.

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3.00 / 5.00

Aug 16, 2008
10:42 PM EDT