Well kind of short here, and the whole "BUTTONS" thing was so 2000's haha not but really this would be better off as a movie type with no buttons but for sure add more content.
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The plot was simple and seems like it could use more depth more stuff going on more things to keep the viewer really interested in your movie, Give more info on characters, places, and when, these are something that could have more depth to them. just something to think about.
Zetto pwnd Alpha the hedge hog LOL
this was good, it's funny and has some hurmor, but....... don't u have to load up a grid or something? and also it's good but maybe a little to short i counted ummm about 25 sec. flash
Nope, no grid needed. Zetto did pretty much this same thing in the show to someone else with no grid.
short but sweet and funny
I was meant to make this longer, but the second part would have just been Alpha finding someone named Zetto that was not the right one. I forget what was going to happen in that scene now. Man I suck at doing story and script, I could have made this longer and better if I was talented.
Your really selling yourself short, this was as good as the original series so good job!
For being really darn short, I guess this was pretty well done. I showed it to a few people efore submitting and they thought Kirb had done it himself, so I guess I did do it well enough. But I am so thankful I have someone else to do the script of the spinoff series because I cannot write up anything that'll last more than 20 seconds. Also thanks for the review.