why are people giving this a 4? I'ts maybe a bit too short, But for a solo project, Its fantastic! And besides, like in the description, its only a drawing practice.
10/10- it deserves every last point!!!
good but not that good
lol O...M...G good good
The animation and such was smooth, and the idea was funny, but here is the criticism.
Graphics: Decent, could have been highly improved. Why don't your graphics look amazing like the many other authors on Newgrounds, your graphics should be awesome. Crappy graphics like this, are used for crappy short jokes.
Time: You obviously didn't spent too long on this movie, and the joke really wasn't strong enough for this 15 second movie. Half the movie was toilet paper shown at different angles.
Sound: The voice-overs could have been majorly improved. The quality of the voices were horrid.
Overall: Poop jokes = not funny
Obviously your standarts for "crappy" need some upgrading.
It was good
I enjoyed watching Mr toilet paper. It mad me laugh. I hope you have more submissions like this one soon.
Even though this was short..,
I really enjoyed this flash. The part that made me laugh the most was the face of the toilet paper. OMG, his face and his words were priceless. I see you've changed from sprites to drawing, which is a nice, new addition. The music in this flash fit well with the scene. The Art and Animation was good. It could be improved though and I know you have the potential to improve. The credits was really "bustin out". I liked this flash overall. It was full of epic proportions. Nice going E! ;)
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Thanks marine primate : D