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Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 7

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Aug 9, 2008 | 11:39 PM EDT

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EDIT (8/9/08): I remade the ending so it makes more sense. I was very dissatisfied with it myself, I like it much more now.

I'm going to be gone for the next few days, so I figured I should get something out there for you to enjoy in my absence. I made this entire thing today, so if there is a glitch/problem that I didn't catch, I apologize about that, after 8 hours of animating, you tend to not care if an eye gets out of place. Anyway, enjoy Jim and Pals Shorts Episode 7.



Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

hehe lol

that was cool...

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Rated 4 / 5 stars


Personally, I'm not too keen on this one to be honest, I mean it is okay but there are a few things I would have rather seen in this, I would have found it much funnier if he started to chew through the gum. I know that would also be kind of disgusting, lol, but it would have amused me personally which is all I'm thinking of here.

The ending is also kind of bleh to me, I was expecting him to crash into something or someone, like one of the girls who has appeared in some of your other flash, that might have been a bit more amusing. Those are just my ideas anyway, this is okay and the timing of the ending is good, so nice work on that, also you have the hand joke in this again, which is clever to see, just don't over use it.



Jimtopia responds:

Let me just say that this one in particular I didn't think through, and as a result I can tell that it suffered a bit, and on some of your points I agree. The reason I didn't have Jim chew the gum though, is because he doesn't have a mouth, and it would have been difficult to show what he's doing. I also didn't want this to end up too much like RTIL's cartoon "GUM" ( w/381169).

Concerning the ending, to use an old saying, I "wrote myself into a corner." I made this flash as I went along, and when you do that, you're not really focusing on the ending, you're focusing on making it funny wherever you're at in the animation. Looking back now, I regret having not thought through it before I did the flash (at least) but hey, you win some, you lose some.

I admit that I kind of dropped the ball on this one. I'll make sure not to let that happen again.



Rated 5 / 5 stars


it was funny when he lost his hand by gum

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Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Oh Jim and his hands...

Not bad this one, i think the music is what really made this work.
The animation was pretty good too...

Jimtopia responds:

The music was just a random thing I decided to throw in, I'm glad it worked out so well.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


The evil eyes new or has Jim had them before? Lol... I`m too lazy to watch the old ones to check... But still this was just as funny as the other ones :D

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Cool, I'm glad you think so.