Not bad but still lacking...

Umm... I don't like yoshi so much, the voices were unclear and somewhat silent- try using a better mic and don't stick it in your mouth so it doesn't make weird screeching noises. Still a good job but you could done alot better!

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I'd ask the neighbor if it could go any higher and to keep the heavy metal playin all day!!!!

whats a routy?

You should really consider turning off your tv when you're recording your own audio.