First of all I noticed the low framerate. Speed it up and it'll look MUCH more professional.
Second: The plot was unclear...
Third. Use sound effects. It was only the music playing, and it can be boring to watch.
Fourth: Add easing to the tweens.
Fifth: More frame by frame...
I liked your detailed drawings. You said that you had been working with Animation 4? What's that?
Keep it up, and MORE FBF (frame by frame :D)
Good to be your first flash!
HEY DUDE...I JUSS GOT DONE WATCHING YOUR TOON...REAL FUNNY...AWESOME STUFF.
I LIKE THE IDEA..I WAS WATCHING HOW YOU WERE ABLE TO MAKE CERTAIN LAYERS BLUR AND OTHES NOT...THE ONLY WAY I COULD EVEN THINK OF DOIN THAT IS WITH PHOTO SHOP...BUT THATS TO MUCH WORK TO IMPORT AND CONFIGURE...IS THERE SOME KIND OF FLASH TUTORIAL THAT GIVES POINTERS AND SECRECT TIPS??
ID APPRICIATE IT...MAYBE WE CAN COLLAB ONE DAY....
"It was okay"
It was okay for your first flash. The animation seemed alittle slow.
This flash needs a plot because the title is misleading. What is this flash about?
WELL IM IN A GROUP...HIPHOP GROUP CALLED THE CAREERKILLAZ...THIS WAS JUST A TEST TO SEE WHAT IT WOULD LOOK LIKE IF I ANIMATED US...THATS ALL...
I WANT TO DO MORE....JUSS GOTTA DECIDE WHAT TO DO!!! TUFF DECISION....GOT ANY IDEAS??????