the pixel pumpkin needs more work and jokes, but looks good
you need to make it longer and add more jokes
if your lucky this will pass
but it was badly drawn the voice over was ok but the script needs work and you need to find a better way to get your point across so try harder on your animation and try harder on your writing you have pontential just need to show it
for a short, random movie its accualy a little funny
you should make a longer one
I actually quite liked the flash it was and interesting idea.I had my headphones on like you said but the breaks in the sound left a strange silence, therefore it could have been better with some light background music.