So judging from everything here seems like you are on the right track, there are some interesting visuals and I like your idea of direction on this flash entry and seems you really know what you are doing so that was all a plus. This one had all sorts of creations and some really good artistic value to it, I really like the "VIEW-SHOTS" on this one it was unique and interesting with lots of random to it so nice job indeed. But anyways as this review comes to a close, I would like to take this time to say this was pretty good and in some ways a bit unique those are things you dont see all the time, but with that said hope to see more of your work especially if its like this, but anyways great job on this one, Hope to see what you come up with next. and hope its even better.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some ideas and tips on improving some points of the flash, so here are some suggestions, I hope they help. They are some basic ideas that possibly you have overlooked or didnt notice before but they should help on making this a better movie entery. I would maybe show this in short clips in one movie everything was too random but maybe if it was in clips might be a good showcase.