At last some character development! Not that there wasn't any already but personally I think that the necropolis/Devil Slayer runs thin in the category of character development, you really don't get to analyse the relationships between character's that much anymore.
Although I love the show, this is pretty much the only one I favorited.
Animation was decent. Although the lip syncing was off in one place the rest is spot on.
Also, you may want to lower the volume on your music and increase the volume of your dialogue/monologue. I could barely hear what the old man/english demon said half the time
Somthing about fish taco's I think... =P
Well your pesky rat fiend is back. The doctor character, though he was supposed to be understandably old, lost context in terms of animation. He was completely inconsistent with the rest of your style. You have three to four storylines going on, but you adressed one where you previously moved in many directions. Lack inspiration for consistency eh? Well, you may slowly sway the rat to leave you alone, due to complete lack of interest.
New General's point about the lack of detail to make the Devil distinguishable from the other imortals is also annoying. Unless you were to show the Devil's ability to lose such details, which would require longer, fuller detailed episodes much earlier on. But again my interest in your work in genereal wanes. Though your potential as an artist still stands.
Voice acting was quite bad, animation smoothness was average but wobbly. The Sound effects lacked bass or loudness. Story was quite boring actually. Instead of trying to make it scary, you made it foolish. Some scenes looked like he was fucking someone. Seriously. I guess you should improve the smoothness of the animation and the story because it down right uninteresting right now. I see that you won't continue this series. Well in your next one think about all the things I said in this review. The olds man face looked Chinese but that doesn't really matter it just makes him a little childish if you know what I mean.
The devil looked like 21 year old boy. Try to implement some wrinkles or cuts on old, or devil like people to make them more horrifying or generally more detailed.
Ok, thanks for pointing out the obvious for me!
I love the directing, the art style, and most of the voice actors were really good, but Doc's generic "old man" voice could of used some work... it sounded a bit forced...
overall, though, a great submission...
Thanks! I'll make sure to talk to his actor about it.
i know this was more story based but it would be good to see more fighting. pretty short too
Yeah, well, 9 out of my 11 submissions have lots of fighting, especially the Nightgun series. Check that out.